Saturday, December 13, 2008

Brown Eyes Search For Blue Comments

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As the earth searches the skies above
So do her brown eyes search for blue
As the desert needs the soaking rain
So does she need his love so true
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Tia Maria
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Carl Harris 13 May 2009

This is a delightful and wonderfully well written poem, Tia, and enjoyed your excellent phrasing in it quite a bit. I felt bad, though, because you've been looking for blue eyes all this time, and here I have green eyes! So it looks like I've missed the boat again! Thanks anyway, Tia, for this charming poem which was a pleasure to read. Carl.

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Lynda Robson 17 December 2008

How lovely T, and who might those blue eyes belong to then? Hope you get all the love you deserve, 10 Lynda xx

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Thad Wilk 13 December 2008

I hope soon your dreams will 'come true' an that you find all of the love that you search for - in those 'eyes of blue'! Best wishes! Friend Thad

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 13 December 2008

Like the ocean blue, so deep is the love for you, come my brown eyes dive in and see what I say is true... Andy x

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Goran Gustafsson 13 December 2008

Beautiful poem of love with the nature and the lovers in one eternal emrace

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Kris Smith 13 December 2008

Happiness for you, a nice place to be 10 +++ Chris

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