Monday, August 8, 2005

Brown Eyes Comments

Rating: 5.0

the sweet girl with the bold brown eyes that laugh is heading home.
somewhere between the lamp posts she smiles at her secrets.
the halogen light only amplifies the tears.
distant now are her loves.
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul
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Richard Stilwell 24 September 2005

For her I hold out my hand and becon her to me... come here... let me hold you. This is an outstanding poem thank you for posting it. Rick

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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 10 August 2005

Adam, I am glad you like it. Eila

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