Monday, October 17, 2005

Brown Bear Comments

Rating: 5.0

The dampness woke him.
He stretched into a furry thing
which could not be made out
here in the darkness of the cave.
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Mary Nagy 28 October 2005

I thought it sounded 'cozy' in there...of course, only if he stayed sleeping! Very cute...I'm glad I found this one. Don't know how I missed it. sincerely, Mary

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Mahnaz Zardoust-Ahari 17 October 2005

Animal instincts are strong this time of the year.....nice write.

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Ernestine Northover 17 October 2005

The thought gives me the shivers, Herbert, but thank goodness it was winter! Great write. Sincerely Ernestine

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