Wednesday, February 8, 2012

Brothers Till The End Comments

Rating: 4.6

Taken from me and returned to our mother Hera.
You were my brothers by blood and at heart.
And now you lay separate,
Only one is allowed to return to the heavens,
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Kelsea Osterman
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Joel Sheyi 19 February 2012

~i luv ds.....gr8 work~

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Dawn Lambert 13 February 2012

a very couraging poem about love for brothers i am 14 years old and i love poems please check me out

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isabella Francis 09 February 2012

Just beautiful.. Very well written and so full of feelings... Admirable.

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Wahab Abdul 08 February 2012

what a poem it is! I like the poem very much because it is a beauty, please keep it up and keep writing and please read my poems.

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Ekaterina M. Polischuk 08 February 2012

well, i really have nothing to say cause it`s not just a poem... it is going without saying you are a true talent. keep it up. your poems have a harmony of words mystery and meaning, sadness and unexplained beauty... i really enjoyed reading this...thanks a lot... and i want you to read my poems. i`ll be happy if you let me know what do you think about them :)

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Vipins Puthooran 08 February 2012

this's because of you've a got a pure heart/I like this poem// top marks! ! !

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Devils Favorite Child Blade 08 February 2012

a very excellent poem good word choice u got major talent dont ever stop writing poems

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Dead Leaf 08 February 2012

a great poem.........

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