Thursday, January 3, 2019

Brothers? Comments

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Brothers?

Unhappy trees are!
Brother helps the enemy
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Devanshu Patel
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Aniruddha Pathak 04 January 2019

Frankly, it took some time but I see the point made, may be at 77, I've slowed down.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2019

At present time has changed and such changes are observed. Brothers should help brothers. Certainly at present time they are helping enemies to destroy brothers. This poem is thought provoking as well as sensitive. A brilliant sharing is done here.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 03 January 2019

A powerful short write. Thought provoking poem. Indeed, an agony when a brother has a different ideology and helps the enemy. It destroys the very bond of a family. Cleverly written 3 liner write.

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Abhipsa Panda 03 January 2019

Very true sir.........

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Devanshu Patel

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Kapadwanj, Gujarat (India)
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