Tuesday, March 3, 2009

Brothers Comments

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yeah they get on our nerves
but they care for their sisters.

they bug dad and mom
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Alyshia Parker
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Shekhar Joshi 12 March 2009

i have one brother and we fight a lot but now he is not with us he's in japan studying. i miss him loads. your poem made me remember of those old memories and those fights good work

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Greenwolfe 1962 06 March 2009

This is a rather typical description of a relationship between sisters and brothers. I thought it was plain and direct. No surprises here. GW62

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