Wednesday, June 1, 2016

Brother Or Father..? ? ? Comments

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Coolness of my heart
Calmness of my eyes
Flow of my words
Drive of my life
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Fatima Obaid
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Bri Edwards 02 June 2016

you make your point! you love your brother. if i had more time i would make some English suggestions, but i'm just too busy now. thanks for sharing. i like your bio, but one 'correction' there would be: change breathe to breath. i used to get those two words mixed up. bri :)

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Painfully beautiful poem Fatima.Pain is a first step to pleasure. Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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Woru Sulyman 01 June 2016

loss is harder when it's the loss of a loved one

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