I found my steps, wrong,
The period of astray, long,
The shadow of Satan, strong.
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Nicely done Abdulrazak! Lovely expression From beginning to end! I wish it was a bit longer lol. Great read
Marvellous expression. The favourite lines are......I found my steps, wrong, The period of astray, long, The shadow of Satan, strong. Thanks for sharing. 10
Ameen to what Mr. C.P Sharma said True universal brotherhood of man and God watches over us all with his benevolence. The strings of love bind us all together dear Abdulrazak, a great write. I salute you for your love for your sister and a fellow poet.
Human thoughts and universal feelings makes oneself to perfection and when it comes through poem it is a good thing for humanity which is the binding force of peaceful life.
Wonderful is this world of Poem Hunter which unites souls of poets.A great poem.
poetry always make our mind refined- you belong to the poets family definitely
What a sensible and bold confession and what an amazing resilience. Thanks for sharing this wonderful poem.
A Wonderful write with beautiful lines..... I found my steps, wrong, The period of astray, long, The shadow of Satan, strong. I am not sure what I should comment on this poem. All I can tell is dear brother, Welcome to Poemhunter. Keep on writing. You poems are beautiful to read.
Thank you sister for your compassionate words and motivation
So pleased you have found your steps. Geetha is such a beautiful poet and I feel her every word. I thank you and welcome you to PH
Good that you found yourself Abdulrazak and now you know what you are to do on this earthly sojourn. Best of luck.
Well expressed in a poet family, nice writing sir.