Friday, December 26, 2008

Brother Lost Comments

Rating: 3.2

my brother he is lost to me,
grew up and he out grew me.

moved away to hide from dad,
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Amanda Ford
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Bravo Amanda....you are a lovely sister and this poem depicts that...Wish you and your bro all the happiness...

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Shekhar Joshi 18 April 2009

love and pain for your brother are expressed wonderfully here. i liked the rhythm i love my brother too another AMAZING poem great work

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Stephanie Saba 29 December 2008

it's a nice poem.: ] I wish him well.

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Amanda Ford

Amanda Ford

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