Thursday, February 29, 2024

Brother John Comments

Rating: 5.0

You were deathly ill and grew bonier and bonier
Almost deaf and dumb, and could only mime
and I thought it was a dream
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Koffi B Sossou
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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2024

A beautiful depiction of life. Life on Earth and life after death. Lovingly penned for a brother.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 December 2024

So deeply poignant and touching. A wonderful tribute to your beloved brother.

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Koffi B Sossou 10 May 2024

Dreams you had, yet unachieved.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 February 2024

I can relate to this poem. I watch three people died in the last eight years It's a wonderful tribute to yr brother

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Koffi B Sossou 10 March 2024

Thank you LeeAnn. Just painful memories sometimes.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 29 February 2024

A wonderful poem..... liked it. Top score

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Koffi B Sossou 29 February 2024

You are not here to read this poem, brother. But never will you die my heart.

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