Wednesday, December 6, 2017

Brother In Arm Comments

Rating: 4.9

At this flimsy arcade
The sky lost it's barricades
As battle cries assumed a mist
Yet to go with you I must insist
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Craig Moses Uche
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2. This exhortation to give peace a chance is for the ears of all rulers, all leaders of the world. The excellent rhyme scheme makes the poem exquisite. Top score

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Beautiful. " lay down your arm And be my brother in arm" is the advice of the poet to the world as a whole. Loved it.

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Anjandev Roy 26 May 2023

This is an outstanding work with great message.....thanks

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 25 May 2023

Excellent piece Craig Encore! !

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A wonderful poem with a meaningful message. Very inspiring..

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Bharati Nayak 02 January 2022

Thank you Craig Moses Uche for this wonderful poem.Wish you a Happy and Peaceful New Year 2022

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Craig Moses Uche 03 January 2022

Thanks so much madam for reading my poems_ I'm really grateful for indulgence and your appreciation for them. God bless you richly and have a very Happy new Year 2022.

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Bharati Nayak 02 January 2022

If the sounds of guns Did put men on the run For you I'd stand as barricade And on my chest I'd bear the raid-----It is a war against war, a song of peace that will brave the bullets and disarm the arms;

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 February 2019

World peace! ! Be my brother. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Jazib Kamalvi 25 December 2017

A nice poetic imagination, Chibueze. You may like to read my poem, Love and Lust. Thanks

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Colin Jeffery 06 December 2017

A brilliant poem - - creating images that inspire.

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