Thursday, February 22, 2007

Brother And Sister Comments

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Why we call each other
Brother and sister?
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Kt Tep 13 June 2007

Hey see fee lee- The start of your poem was a bit slow, but you immediately picked up the pace to keep the happy poetry reader enticed and I especially enjoyed the last verse, that was the best! Keep up at it, you've got a talent, and I firmly believe if someone wastes a talent, it is a crying shame. God bless! Regards-KT Tep

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