Hey see fee lee-
The start of your poem was a bit slow, but you immediately picked up the pace to keep the happy poetry reader enticed and I especially enjoyed the last verse, that was the best! Keep up at it, you've got a talent, and I firmly believe if someone wastes a talent, it is a crying shame.
God bless!
Regards-KT Tep
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Hey see fee lee- The start of your poem was a bit slow, but you immediately picked up the pace to keep the happy poetry reader enticed and I especially enjoyed the last verse, that was the best! Keep up at it, you've got a talent, and I firmly believe if someone wastes a talent, it is a crying shame. God bless! Regards-KT Tep