Sunday, May 17, 2009

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why would he say
what he said today
hes lying
and crying
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Jessica Caswell
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Dans Only 24 May 2009

Nice write. Easily read. I like the rhyme and that it really didn't follow a rhyme scheme. I could also relate with the topic. Good job. Thanks.

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Aleksandra Lachut 21 May 2009

Very because i do not have a brother but i have a sister older than me but we always argue and disagree with each other.Very beautiful poem.

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