Monday, October 2, 2017

Brother (2) Comments

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Oh God! What a state of life with death fears!
You couldn't save my brother for more years!
Why didn't you target me to die?
Why didn't you spare my brother to stop my cry! !
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Chan Mongol
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Richard Wlodarski 03 October 2017

Chan, your brother was so fortunate to have had a brother who loved him so much. You have done him a great service by honouring his memory with your two poems.

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Rajnish Manga 03 October 2017

This is all about life. It is so unpredictable. Death pouncing upon an innocent soul unawares and causing so much pain to the patient and torture to the near and dear ones. The void left by the passing away of your dearest brother can never be filled. RIP Brother.

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