Tuesday, November 14, 2006

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Brothel of silence oppresses swarming blather.
Rolling clouds shadow our words that gather.
Only speaking true words will gain respect.
Tantalizing the soul, enriching any affect.
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Melvina Germain 21 June 2007

This is a wonderful Acrostic I love this form of poetry very much. It's sometimes a real challenge, you did a great job on this one Cecil, I thoroughly enjoyed the read. You make it easy for your readers to identify with the capitalizing of the letters. Well done Cecil, love it.--Melvina--

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