These pages are a river
down which a young girl watches
her lover disappear,
...
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I don't want to hyperbolize here, Max(well) - but this is absolutely lovely!
I can't say it as well as the other three poets but good poem.
hummm...this poem...it intertwines naturally as it talks of that transiton when are ''conscious'' to when we drift in-ward and then totally disappear into the world of our imagination...! Bravo Max~
This is delightful, Max...and brought back many fond memories. Raynette
Another marvelous piece Max. Tight and meaningful.