Brooding Over... Comments

A wonderful and inspiring poem. A beautifully crafted write imbued with insight and great imagery.

Short and cute meaningful poem.....10

First line is captivating a so true, lovely poem thank you for sharing Rose

that was awesome, keep up the great writing. That is so true, we should live like there is no tomorrow. I like to say it this way, Don't worry about tomorrow until your tomorrow becomes your today. That is the only way to live. Best wishes Your friend Nora

Past is to learn and move on. Nice message. Present the word itself says...its a present 'a gift'. Nice thought.

Awesome work buddy....present is the only gift...keep up the gud work: -)

It is the only truth......... what is life! ! ! ... 'Presence' nice lines friend! !

Well, you nailed the point... Life is a wonderful journey... Nice work... ^-^

such a lovely poem and says what i feel like telling the world all the time. thanks for sharing this lovely piece with me.

beautiful real thoughts presented in ur words..........happy to read! ..Winnie

i posted new poem, hope u have time to read it? ur feedback n views is highly appriciated.. Thank u in advance my friend..

EXCELLENT! THIS IS THE SIMPLEST TRUTH WHICH EVERYONE THOUGH UNDERSTANDS BUT FAILS TO IMPLEMENT PRACTICALLY IN LIFE.10+

This is a very good poem, Kesav, a very tangible advice placed in fine streight words. It has great worth.10

True enough.. God only gives us the challenges that we can handle., . Every challenge is a learning then Y broode.... Beautiful & true

Great work Kesav, a wonderful flowing poem. Best wishes, Andrew

wow...the last line totally changed the class of the poem! 'Buds that bloom in others needs...' awesome sir! ! thank you very much.

yes so much to learn from nature Learn from birds that fly singing From ants that keep working; Learn from honey storing bees, Buds that bloom in others needs... wonderful write ++++10 anju

Fine sentiments in this lovely poem, Kesav.

speechless...........................

Lessons from nature to live the present...quite true10