Tuesday, February 22, 2011

Brood Bypassed By........... Comments

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Brood abound in heart for the soul departed,
Enroute, sitting by the window and so seated,
Ruminating of the joys and pains we shared,
Throat chocked and heart heavy, I endured.
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Narayanan Ramakrishnan
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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 March 2011

nicely and sensualy written. eroticsm well brought out. marks 10 shan

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 23 February 2011

Very fascinating poem almost near to reality. Life doesn't stop for anyone whether it is beauty or ugliness. A wise and careful person avoids beautiful impediments to accomplish much greater task. I liked the way you have written this poem. Great and contemplative write.

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Rekha Mandagere 23 February 2011

Great tribute to Love! I love the sentiments portrayed in this poem.

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