Bronc-Bonk! Crank-Conk! A Lone Owl On Tree Honks On The Riverbank! Comments

I know this pain in the deep of my heart... I tried to mention a line here as my favourite line of this poem but I coudn't.....every line is amazing.... Your Highness! You're a great poet... Top marks! ! !

I only truly understand this poem now... I feel the pain...

SO heartfelt. the more you stressed about it the theme become bold and bolder, i feel how fears you felt in every line you wrote..ocean and land is the same, separated...see how pacific ocean missed the Hindi ocean, or how it feels for other sea...physically the sea is there in pacific ocean but the soul of ocean is the water..and water move and traveled from one to another, in force with feeling waves...dont chase it to poles yet you will frozen as ice in Artic/Antarctica..free your water soul as it can reach anywhere..wandering all land and shore..calm your feelings, one day you will feel the freshness from river where it will make your saltiness less by it fresh..Be positive my friend, smile more for more hahaha ok? hahahaha_Unwritten SOul

This poem is simply brilliant, I tried to pick out my favorite line, from this poem, and was not able to choose, every line was explosive! Perfect poem 10+++++: D

The last stanza captures the poem brilliantly. Home is where the heart is, but I can see that you truly miss your home country. Going home soon, Harry, then your heart can once again rejoice... Till then, you have friends here to fill the emptiness in your mind, but unfortunately we can do nothing about your longing heart. Maybe perhaps give you a thousand smiles - :) + to see you through...