Broken Comments

So touching. This resonates with me. The poet has done a nice work reminding us that some times, we have to encourage ourselves and say 'It is well' even when we clearly know that all is not well. It's a good write.

Great emotion and anguish.

Well done x Top marks : )

i love this poem its very emotional.. i would love it if you coulod read my poetry and give your opinion...you seem like a kindred spirit

You explain this feeling so well, I know many men have difficult showing their sadness. It's a shame really because it's OK to share that emotion. Wonderful poem, I enjoyed reading it.--Melvina--

Sadness of heart is a forced front that man must really issue forth as a masked charade of bravery. Tis a lie we men must all bear and embrace. Man is supposed to be brave and fearless and show very little emotion to sadness and it's weakness as percieved by all and our straight male peers. Leave the sadness with all the queers. Great poem of love coming to an abrupt ending so sad. Easily i gave it a ten. God bless to thee-Michael Jeffrey Gale.

Know this feeling as I'm sure do many! Nicely written, Moyaxxx

very heightened sense of pain and loss is conveyed - nice choice of words. keep it up (:

short and painful. nice though i liked it. im sorry if this is a real experience and im also sorry about my spelling. youre good. i am impressed.

A very sad and a touching poem S.G........SCATTERED THINGS, VERY HARD TO REJOIN...........LIFE IS AN ELEGY..........EVERYTHING ENDS WITH SORROW..........SMILE & CRY......NO DIFFERENCE?

Good one- this.Yes, don't let them see us crumble as we say goodbye.I felt it..kudos-]0[

So very sad, I feel for you, having been there, many times.

Another good one. Poetry helps with emotions. It helps even men who don't have any. Hxx