Broken Wishes Comments

What a beautiful write. In simple words this poem explains how failure and dejection affect us in our lives.

As the warmth of mother's lap and charm of a young lady. Thank you for shared a very beautiful poem

What is left to us Are just wishes, broken. Beautifully crafted poem sir. Thanks.

Some could accompany To the door of death and stand by all weather. Nice poem.

Some were kept alive As the warmth of mother's lap and charm of a young lady. Lovely poem, thanks. 10++

Some were kept alive As the warmth of mother's lap and charm of a young lady. Beautiful poem shared. 10 for it.

And gone are Those days. What is left to us Are just wishes, broken. A poem with a distinct effect. Loved this write. 10++ for it.

Anything broken in life carries crackles of marks of time and provokes thought expressing existence of failure. But there is no need to worry. With positive hope we can join the broken marks in to clear promise...10