Tuesday, November 17, 2015

Broken Wings Comments

Rating: 5.0

You break my wings
So that I cannot fly
My heart had dreams
But now they will die
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Paul Sebastian
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Farah Anasmosa 19 December 2015

You break my wings So that I cannot fly My heart had dreams But now they will die A heart touching poem as I can sense the sadness. Thanks for sharing.10

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 November 2015

Sad drop. Has a beautiful rhyming and flow. Liked it.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 17 November 2015

The poem bearing a sense of distress is most touching. The emotions expressed are tormenting and finally the bowing before the unavoidable.10 +++

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