Wednesday, August 1, 2012

Broken Wings Comments

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In this lovely sunny day,
How much I wish I could fly
Just like a gentle and happy dove
Who bravely takes off to the sky,
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Romeo Della Valle
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Champs Ulysses Cabinatan 11 August 2012

beautiful poem. deep.

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Marieta Maglas 10 August 2012

You combined so poetically the elements of the nature to describe the freedom and the pain-great poem, thank you for sharing.Mari.

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Olumide Omoyele 01 August 2012

This...this homage to the power of flight...to being jealous of the freedom of birds...resonates SO MUCH with me! ! Beautiful poem

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