Thursday, August 13, 2009
Broken Wings Comments
Rating: ★2.5
Perfect wings are meant to fly,
But my broken wings are in no condition to mend.
Theres seems to be problems I always see,
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Max Corvus Tenebrus
27 February 2012
Please do not write slang, it's disgusting that way. The topic isn't bad but grammar mate!
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Emily Oldham
14 August 2009
some really nice metaphors here, i like this poem. keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***
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7/27/2025 7:02:12 PM # 1.0.0
Perfect wings are meant to fly, But my broken wings are in no condition to mend. A sad start.