Friday, July 7, 2006

~broken Wing~ Comments

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How low you fly through hushed breezes,
a'falter as whispers ground you...
Fade within your shadow,
hide amongst the dark of light.
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Lesa K 07 July 2006

The words of this one are very beautiful. Great job!

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Aashish Ameya 07 July 2006

nice imagery, nicely written...good verse

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