Broken Vase 1 Poem by Steven Aragon

Broken Vase 1

I hate when you disappoint me.
Its a let down.
I feel it in my chest and shoulders.
A weight that won't let me look up or forward.
Its the same when I know I could've done better for you.
It just makes the space between us feel further apart.
I hate that.

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This the foundation of a piece I'm working on. I was told I could expand while keeping the raw expression. I do like the spareness of it, but come with me on its journey.
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