Broken Up With Comments

because i am going where love does not last? -> please let me know if you ever find that place...

Very good, you picked the right words that describe your silent despair... Are you cold blooded? I am.

ohhh, the pain, when with thunder comes rain. good write 10+

Ough... Blue..as your eyes..

very sweet it's silent to me compared to your other poems but I really do like this one

oh my goodness thats exactly how i feel right now! ! ! thats AMAZING! ! !

it seem that iam not the only one who's in love lol but i really like it, keep it up

Vow! Great write! I enjoy it!

i love the last line! 'gone to a place where love does not go' it's simply beautiful.: ]

i love it. its so emotional and deep. nice!

beautifully written....very touching....this is very painful i guess....nice poem...written from deep within..all emotions are being poured out...accepting the bitterness and the moving on........10+++++... MERRY CHRISTMAS......

Huhuhuhuhu, , so sad, , it's too much pain, I feel that too when I broke up with my boyfriends, and that's too much hurt, , This is a nice poem, , (^_^) Naru Kaede, ,

personal? ? this is really a great piece..

Your poem is good, I love it...........well I love it so much

vividly expressed feeling, but i'd work on the structure some more...it feels like you're trying to express too much in too few words

i can connect to it....ive been thru sumhing similar... it comes right frm ur heart and touches right into my heart....

Words came out from heart! ....mind-blowing! well done.

It's kinda sad~ but i like it~

nice rhime as always fine I see a broken love which is not mine cuz there will be hope this time........... go ahead...

I like it it expresses your feelings