Broken Tree Comments

So where do you hide my love When your are too afraid to breath And no movements can be done Cause you are broken inside what a sweet poem is this one...really impressive.i wrote also one of my poems unfer the same title but different way... i liked this poem very much 10/10

lovely piece...the feel u presented is simply good and genuine..and the last two lines re simply beautiful..

'You go with the wind to finally be free You hide inside to rebuild that broken tree' I love these lines most, wonderful poem.

Yet another fine example of your talent....lovely written piece Thanks for sharing best wishes Jon

I can just repeat it one more time- I'm your fan! Impressive

oh my..it touches my heart.....just like when my friend told me this...go wd d wind, a hurricane..you will be........keep on writing...keep on inspiring brokem hearted people

Very romantic poetry Martine, it gives hope to a brokenhearted soul, worth the 10. Great write my friend.