Thursday, January 26, 2012

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Rating: 4.3

Spinning, Swirling,
Round and Round.
My mind is twirling,
I fall to the ground.
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Deana(Felicia) Dotterweich
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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 28 February 2012

thank you :)

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Michael Williams 27 February 2012

Verry good poem. You brought the feeling of life spinning that love gives me, you did well.

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~Deana ~ Dotterweich 01 February 2012

I am Fully German :) my grandma came to America when she was little

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