Friday, November 27, 2020

Broken Spirits Comments

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Bunches of shattered souls in this world
And this does need fixes
Broken spirits to be healed
Worn out hearts to be mended.
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Aarzoo Mehek
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Jazib Kamalvi 10 December 2020

Zara sa gism se aage, samaaj e rooh hai janaan. In aankhon se zara peechhe, siraaj e rooh hai janaan. Waheen par zakhm hain saare, waheen se dard uthte hain. Rooh se rooh ka bandban, ilaaj e rooh hai janaan. (Jazib Kamalvi)

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Edward Kofi Louis 04 December 2020

Broken spirits of life! ! Souls on earth, In search for a better place. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rajnish Manga 28 November 2020

shattered souls in this world need fixes Broken spirits to be healed.... //.... That's the most sensible way of accepting the reality that we have so many shattered souls around us. What they need is compassion and understanding along with love and dignity. It is quite legitimate if these souls are 'Looking for a benevolent heart to lift their spirits'. Thanks a lot.

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Anjandev Roy 27 November 2020

Dejected in their own spirit........brilliant......thank u.....anjandev roy.

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Varsha M 27 November 2020

This is elloquent. Indeed broken spirit to be healed and worn out souls to be revived.... thank-you ma'am for penning this.

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Kostas Lagos 27 November 2020

The sadness of our world...great poem

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