When I close my eyes
She smiles with her eyes
Her soft tone pats me
And I hear those words
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I guess this is not your personal love...just an imagery....with touching sorrow...a sad poem indeed
sad and almost spoken in a hushed pain very tender...i wonder what inspired this piece nice poetry cheers
how sad! looks very natural. you have a style man a 10+++ from me surya
I totally thing that the pain will slowly go away, very well written poem! ! ! ! !
it should disappear..this sad melancholy...may be she din't deserve you...love hurts
broken song a real melancholy a solitude ......... best write...........
Poem portrays a reality of life - pain.