Monday, June 29, 2009

Broken Song Comments

Rating: 5.0

When I close my eyes
She smiles with her eyes
Her soft tone pats me
And I hear those words
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Kranthi Pothineni
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Walterrean Salley 03 January 2010

Poem portrays a reality of life - pain.

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Indira Renganathan 27 July 2009

I guess this is not your personal love...just an imagery....with touching sorrow...a sad poem indeed

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Saadat Tahir 15 July 2009

sad and almost spoken in a hushed pain very tender...i wonder what inspired this piece nice poetry cheers

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Louis Rams 30 June 2009

a heart in pain can never be the same

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Eyan Desir 30 June 2009

I liked the way you wrote this poem well written

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Joseph Poewhit 30 June 2009

Captures the pain of love

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Catrina Heart 30 June 2009

Such a sad one...heartfelt, with the words of alone!

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premji premji 30 June 2009

pain pain..in every line.........

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Surya . 30 June 2009

how sad! looks very natural. you have a style man a 10+++ from me surya

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Janell Cressman 29 June 2009

I totally thing that the pain will slowly go away, very well written poem! ! ! ! !

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it should disappear..this sad melancholy...may be she din't deserve you...love hurts

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rago rago 29 June 2009

broken song a real melancholy a solitude ......... best write...........

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