Broken Song Comments

Poem portrays a reality of life - pain.

I guess this is not your personal love...just an imagery....with touching sorrow...a sad poem indeed

sad and almost spoken in a hushed pain very tender...i wonder what inspired this piece nice poetry cheers

a heart in pain can never be the same

I liked the way you wrote this poem well written

Captures the pain of love

Such a sad one...heartfelt, with the words of alone!

pain pain..in every line.........

how sad! looks very natural. you have a style man a 10+++ from me surya

I totally thing that the pain will slowly go away, very well written poem! ! ! ! !

it should disappear..this sad melancholy...may be she din't deserve you...love hurts

broken song a real melancholy a solitude ......... best write...........