Wednesday, October 16, 2013

Broken Smile Comments

Rating: 4.9

Nothing can break me strong
More than a pair of indifferent eyes
I shall not boast of a genuine generous heart
But it also turns hard at a face
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Soumita Sarkar
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Heather Wilkins 01 November 2013

beautifully written poem. then nothing can break stronger more than my very own close smile

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Saiom Shriver 21 October 2013

Nothing can break me strong More than a pair of indifferent eyes is a piercing thought... for to come in contact with the very cold is to lose warmth. one sole kind soul that gleams At the back of recognizable beam, , , beautiful

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Wahab Abdul 17 October 2013

a poem of utility... i love it, i love more the following lines ''Knowingly becoming ignorant Can be exhaustingly vague and pathetic'' a nice poem...enjoyed, give you 10

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