Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Broken Sleep Comments

Rating: 5.0

Should turn off the light
but rather than
toss and turn all night
reach for the pen
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Tia Maria
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Rinzu Susan Rajan 01 October 2008

a bful wish... weaved into words... :)

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Ashraful Musaddeq 10 September 2008

I have added my 10 to this nice verse written with a very famaliar matter. Beautiful.

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Tanya Stanford 15 August 2008

Short and sweet. Loved the easy flow of the words.

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Rani Turton 11 July 2008

You can read this poem once, and like it and the second time around you find it has a strangely hypnotic cadence. Thanks!

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Natasha Dementia 09 July 2008

Its a nice, peaceful, and calm poem, Carry on writing *Gives 2 thumbs up*

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Lungelo Mbatha 05 July 2008

i loved reading this-

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blue 802 03 July 2008

Doing OK, Keep them safe, love this one been there 10/10

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