Broken Sky Comments

The pain of parting is evident from each word.............Loved it SN.

Sanjukta, Find another sky! there are so many!

Stars cried tears of Lily petals to have marvelous light in imagery. Wise imagination is interestingly shared in fantastic work....10

sad but beautifully expressed thanks -10

Another gem from you Sanjukta.. Again the imagery is synesthetical, which is really, really beautiful. Excellent and touching poem on heartbreak... Thanks for sharing.. ____________ P: S: A happy kali puja to you :)

lovely concept with powerful imagination