Thursday, December 24, 2015

Broken Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

Even when you were gone
the sea remained calm
snowflakes of broken
dreams gathered on my palm
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Asma Khan
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Ahmed Gumaa Siddiek 26 December 2015

A marvelous poem. Rich with love feelings and sincerity. These lines Gone are the days when I waited for your arrival Time's golden sand in my pocket now for revival is a beautiful image. You have really experienced love.

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Edward Kofi Louis 24 December 2015

Broken silence, broken love. Nice work.

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