Saturday, March 31, 2018

Broken Roads Comments

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Roads taken for escape
Of use no more
Burnt bridges like relics
Stand a stark reminder
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Rizwan Saleem
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Sheikha A. 18 April 2018

loved the last lines: some roses are seeded for a singular purpose for deaths like these are oft repeated

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2018

Most of us know nothing beyond our place in time and space. Many people endure lives I can't imagine. Keep writing from your experience, dear Rizwan.

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Rizwan Saleem 12 April 2018

Thank you for your encouragement Kelly, yes some of the lives are beyond normal endurance

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Dr Antony Theodore 31 March 2018

Nothing is permanent Maybe except for woes of time Ashes fall like snow Blades of grass now grow..... liked ur philosophical thinking nothing is permanent in this world. this is a true realisation.. thank u dear poet. tony

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Rizwan Saleem 10 April 2018

Thank you for reading Dr, much appreciated

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