Broken Reed Comments

'It was my aim, To make a flute of my own.'' Love and Life This is very nice poem. I think, concept of Making flute by ourselves, denotes the stage of self actualization.

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Making a flute is not an easy business. But at least you tried that's the best thing. I'm sure the next flute will play the melody perfect with calculated holes and more of experiences. Beautiful metaphorical poetic expression. Thank-you.

Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.