Broken Promises Comments

Again, you have written a beautiful poem. Well penned Well done. Enjoyed reading it 10+

‘…i learn to live in emptiness // where innocence is lost in the face of wisdom...’ Indeed very much true and empathic mindset poets always pouring…as conscience…of society…well done… no it is well performed promise [wpp] 10 Ms. Nivedita UK Dear Poet, Unable to post message… By heart I invite you to my page…and grace by your comments.if you please… Regards niv

again you back with the beautiful poems lady grace great lines, thanks

learn to live alone where I can find nothing but my shadow shadow of a lonely heart from the promises that has been made....................learn to live in silence, where heart riffles in rune of dream and awes suffers by the shadow of clods, vale of tears refrained to rain, wonderful write by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing sorry yet unable open my message box

learn to live alone where I can find nothing but my shadow shadow of a lonely heart from the promises that has been made....................learn to live in silence, where heart riffles in rune of dream and awes suffers by the shadow of clods, vale of tears refrained to rain, wonderful write by imagery,10++++, thanks for sharing

wow... very moving. you have a talent...

fine poem.. well done.. emotion filled.

Children of earth all who walk this earth will fed with lies.. we live in shadows a simple fall breaks a glass

strong determination to exist in this world......thats a person must be.... strong words... God Bless.....10

its beautiful... i totally loved >