Sunday, January 28, 2007

Broken Promises Comments

Rating: 5.0

You promised you'd change
Wouldn't hit me anymore
You'd cut out the drinking
You promised me more.
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Claire Jones
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Terrance Woolridge 26 February 2007

One word Wow!

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Jim Foulk 28 January 2007

nice one, it is good to get that out, and on to paper. this was a well said poem.

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Claire Jones

Claire Jones

Shrewsbury, United Kingdom
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