Thursday, May 10, 2012

Broken Promises Comments

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On a rain washed night,
Piercing with all its might,
The shrill whistle of the train chugging in.
It's a deserted platform;
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Shruti Goswami
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Arnav Gogoi 15 August 2013

Quite touching. To be honest, I did feel the pain of your girl...Magical and captivating...a must read...thanks for sharing....And if it is love, I would like you to go through my poems and state your take on them...thanks

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