Monday, September 12, 2011

Broken Promises Comments

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Promises are mere hollow words,
Meaningless like me to the birds,
But they represent us, or what we were,
This hollow-like feeling seems to recur.
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Daniel Sims
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Amber Marie 19 September 2011

whoa. I can see anger within this one. I can tell it has a meaningful purpose to express how one feels about ones friend. Its an easy one to figure out, but all in all you are really talented at poems that in which express deep strong emotion. :)

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