Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Broken Promise Comments

Rating: 5.0

its breaking as we speak
the promise you failed to keep
its growing old and week, but you promised.
you swore to keep your word
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mariyamah meiz
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Afzal Shauq 22 July 2009

my mind is going dead, cause you promised inside my secrets dwell love pushed me and i fell sweet lines... and the poem is heartfelt one.. romantic and soul touchy even.. liked it very much and felt like you made of love for love.. wonderful way of writing..thanks for comments and respect..same from my side and love your poetry..and enjoying much...10/10

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great poem.. put awayt h esad feeling eh.. smile!

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