Tuesday, June 25, 2013

Broken Promise Comments

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I heard a sharp cracking sound
like a dry twig that was stepped upon by a giant foot
when I turned around
I realised that you had broken a promise
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Itai Oscar
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Rakshita Gupta 27 June 2013

Well done. I really liked how you personified a promise and made it more as an imagery. Moreover, the onomatopoeia used is also good. Overall, I really liked it. You too are invited to check out my poems and comment.

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Itai Oscar

Itai Oscar

Zimbabwe
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