Broken Promise Comments

Very powerful stroke by pen deserve 10 on 10 keep going........

When it's broken, just sweep the pieces away and bury the past-march towards a brighter future... never fear of the moment of darkness before the arrival of dawn. :)

Small and beautiful composition.

Very impactful simplicity. Very dramatic despite so short. Excellent use of words

Short and condensed yet very powerful.. The condensing of the wording actually makes the idea stand out from the language.

Though very short and subtle, this poem wrenches out the soul of the reader wholesomely, for, it contains the basic nature of man, going on in spite of odds. Thanks for sharing. arya

brief almost curt in its delivery bu the message is very clear

amazing lines...the pain of this broken promise is immense and visible in your verse...

some funerals are situated in winding alleys of blood where earth never dries and incense burns forever life somehow finds its flow around such protrusions