Saturday, January 23, 2016

Broken Pomise Comments

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Promise that meant forever
A face that squirrelled eternity
An echoing silence that would sever
The strings tied in our destiny
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Aniruddha Pathak 31 August 2018

A melody that is off the key, yes, but your style is the key of your poem's melody. A lovely poem. Aniruddha Pathak

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Abhilasha Bhatt 24 January 2016

The string tied in our destiny.....an amazing sharing...thanks... :)

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Terry Craddock 23 January 2016

'Promise that meant forever A face that squirrelled eternity An echoing silence that would sever The strings tied in our destiny' powerful, read this several times :)

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