Tuesday, July 14, 2009

Broken Pieces Comments

Rating: 5.0

My eyes close, you fill my mind
I lay back, you are not behind.
Sorrow fills my saddened soul
My only wish for us to be whole.
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Jasmine Wayne
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Patrick A. Martin 21 July 2009

sometimes the short poems are the best poems and this is one of those times

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Mary Ali 20 July 2009

Beautiful! another 10 :)

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Darlene Belcher 20 July 2009

Find the rest, you so speak, Find the answer within whom you seek. To find the truth look inside, A magnificent angel hides a sigh. And when the truth is set free only then, will the rest be seeked.

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Keith Hendrickson 17 July 2009

another nice piece. short and sweet does it sometimes/. 'awake i stay, rest hides from me' great great line... loved it

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