Take me as I am, just as I am,
For I am broken into pieces
With irregular edges, my flesh
Was scarred by hopelessness,
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This is your newest poem, more than one year old. I hope you are still around and doing well.
MILTON, p.s. good to see you are still sort of with PH, as i am, sort of. bri ;)
a moving piece...or should i type 'pieces'? If you proposed a 'marriage' with you, I'd feel sorry for you, but I'd 'run for the hills'! ! ! I've my own problems. : ( but the poem was worth reading twice. : ) bri
great feeling and strong message with truthful reality and expressing, that is what we are epecting from good poet such as Hankins, well done and thanks for your lovely poem
The pieces of me have struggled To come together to reassemble To make my whole worthy
Want you to know I am capable Of love, If you take me as I am.Fine poetry to read, but sad and melancholic.5 Stars full! I have enjoyed very much reading
A great poem, Milton. Are you still with us? This, your latest poem, is more than three years old. Please share something new to let us know that you are all right.