Broken Pieces Poem by Rini Shibu

Broken Pieces

Rating: 5.0


You walked away without saying a word
Giving me tons of pain
You never know how broken my heart is
Your name will be seen on every tiny piece
I asked the wind
Did you see my love
Birds didn't answer and never returned
Green pastures turned into desert
Dry land soaked with my tears
Wish if this heart stop beating
And soon I stop breathing.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kostas Lagos 25 January 2021

A broken heart aching... A sorrowful masterpiece

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 25 January 2021

A poignant write. Heartfelt and well expressed.

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Sylvia Frances Chan 25 January 2021

A heart-wrenching poem, the words touched my heart,5 stars and to my Favourites. Wonderful saddest poem ever.

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Anil Kumar Panda 25 January 2021

Love is dripping thick from lines. A simple and beautiful love poem. Thanks.

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Richard Wlodarski 26 March 2023

Revisiting this poem...just as sad...and beautiful...as before!

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Richard Wlodarski 19 December 2022

Such a very sad poem! Yet, so very beautiful. Great work, Rini!

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Dear Rini, you have a sea of emotions in.your heart which are capable to rain out as valuable poems

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Rebecca Navarre 03 February 2021

Your name will be seen on every tiny piece. I asked the wind, did you see my love. Very beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Ever so heartfelt! .. Definite 5 Star++++++........poetry

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M Asim Nehal 26 January 2021

Heart knows no limit when it comes to pain. Nicely written poem.5**

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