You walked away without saying a word
Giving me tons of pain
You never know how broken my heart is
Your name will be seen on every tiny piece
I asked the wind
Did you see my love
Birds didn't answer and never returned
Green pastures turned into desert
Dry land soaked with my tears
Wish if this heart stop beating
And soon I stop breathing.
A heart-wrenching poem, the words touched my heart,5 stars and to my Favourites. Wonderful saddest poem ever.
Love is dripping thick from lines. A simple and beautiful love poem. Thanks.
Revisiting this poem...just as sad...and beautiful...as before!
Such a very sad poem! Yet, so very beautiful. Great work, Rini!
Dear Rini, you have a sea of emotions in.your heart which are capable to rain out as valuable poems
Your name will be seen on every tiny piece. I asked the wind, did you see my love. Very beautifully and powerfully expressed! .. Ever so heartfelt! .. Definite 5 Star++++++........poetry
Heart knows no limit when it comes to pain. Nicely written poem.5**
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A broken heart aching... A sorrowful masterpiece