Broken Path Comments
I peep into my empty mind,
where lots of dilemma together combined,
thoughts that haunt me day and night,
the fire that burns with a feeling of delight,
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i agree with sandra...it will lead you to good
well expressed abstract poem, thank you for sharing..........10+++++
yes, the last line be our mantra...nothing to beat that time we spend with self...it heals!
ohh...very deep and meaningful poem... wonderfully expressed. thank you.
This is a very sad piece Priyanka....broken paths can always be mended, , , ,
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7/20/2025 6:32:11 PM # 1.0.0
'Go back to your forlorn pavilion', - to begin another journey...! nice piece...