Friday, December 5, 2008

Broken Old Ladder Comments

Rating: 5.0

I see you standing right next to her
She stares into your eyes so deeply
You take her hand and walk together
Flowing into the corner beside me
...
Read full text

Helena Way
COMMENTS

I love that the last line of the poem is the title. It all leads up to that so well. Great poem!

0 0 Reply
Malcolm The Last. 18 March 2009

Sad poem, but ends happily.

0 0 Reply
Naseer Ahmed Nasir 22 December 2008

Life is not broken old ladder, It's a beautiful stairway as well. It's good that the Angel advised you to move along with your life.

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success